Good storyline

Really enjoyed the storytelling,if anything would have liked it to be a little longer withheld some more added twists

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Disturbing book

The book kept me reading wanting to know the ending, well read a difficult subject but well written.

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Very good, but the American terms jarred a bit!

Would you recommend this audiobook to a friend? If so, why?

I would. It was an absorbing tale that moved along at a pace. I wasn't surprised to discover that the author is a Clinical Psychologist, as, speaking as one myself, it was largely plausible (although most are much clearer with their boundaries)..

What about Julia Barrie’s performance did you like?

Julia Barrie did an excellent job at narration. However, the editing of the narration was a bit sloppy. There were sentences repeated on at least two occasions, one because it had been misread slightly. Another just for a change of emphasis I think. In any event, the repeats were missed.

Any additional comments?

The only character I found likeable was Peter (and he was not a central character). All of the others, including Stella, I would cross the street to avoid. I think Stella was written as a sympathetic character, so other listeners/readers may not have the same response. This wasn't a problem. I don't need to like characters to enjoy a novel, but I know some readers do. For a book set in London with British characters, I found the use of American terms (e.g. Emergency room, Statutory rape) jarring. I couldn't find the nationality of the author, but I think she is British, certainly not American. If it was an attempt to appeal to the American market, I feel it was unnecessary and spoilt the book a little as it interrupted the flow. I'm sure American readers can cope with English terms describing English law etc.

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Showed promise in the beginning, but...

What would have made Don't Stand So Close better?

I feel like the characters were quite one-dimensional. Despite what they were going through I couldn't muster up much compassion for anyone. I feel like the story jumped around too much and this might be okay when written, but when heard this could get a little confusing. It seems like there was a much richer story to be told, at times it felt like I was listening to a second novel in a series.

What could Luana Lewis have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?

More time could have been spent describing the characters, explaining their motivations and backstories. Stella seemed a bit like an empty shell even as the main character in the sections of the story before her trauma. Despite my complaints about the lack of depth in the novel I feel like the ending dragged.

What aspect of Julia Barrie’s performance might you have changed?

Sometimes I feel like the intonation for Blue was a bit off for example, when she should have sounded shocked she might sound flat. Whilst there's always room for interpretation this struck me a few times.

You didn’t love this book--but did it have any redeeming qualities?

I enjoyed Peter's character, I also think that the description of Stella's rape was very well written. I felt very uneasy listening to this and it is probably one of the more shocking, desolate descriptions of rape I have ever read. It will stick with me for some time.

Any additional comments?

I hate to pan a novel, especially when it appears to be the author's first, but I just don't feel like this book lived up to my expectations at all. It's not without it's charm though and I would be tempted to listen to something else by Luana Lewis.

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Awesome beginning, but...

Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why or why not?

I don't think so. There are so many other books I'd recommend over this one. But it's not terrible, just not a title I'd bring up. If the whole book had been as good as the start, I'd be pushing it on everyone I know, but alas...

Would you be willing to try another book from Luana Lewis? Why or why not?

I'm not gonna make a point to avoid this author, but I'm not rushing to read her next one, either.

Which scene did you most enjoy?

The beginning was the most striking, in general. With the traumatized protagonist in her house, the girl outside who refuses to go away and is eventually let in because the alternative seems to be her freezing to death.There's also another scene later on that was very well written, but I'm not gonna spoil it for you.

Could you see Don't Stand So Close being made into a movie or a TV series? Who would the stars be?

Yes, I suppose this could be made into a thriller movie. Not sure who the cast would be.

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Very improbable tale

As a first book this isnt too bad and shows future promise. The editing and storyline needed a lot of tidying up - just how many psychopathic child abusers can you cram into a thriller? The narration was very poor with most male voices being interchangeable. Ok, I might back my payment from audible but I have lost 10 hours of my life :-(

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