
Watched: A Sinfully Erotic Short Story
Failed to add items
Add to basket failed.
Add to wishlist failed.
Remove from wishlist failed.
Adding to library failed
Follow podcast failed
Unfollow podcast failed
3 months free
Buy Now for £2.99
No valid payment method on file.
We are sorry. We are not allowed to sell this product with the selected payment method
-
Narrated by:
-
Jack Calihan
-
By:
-
Lexi Lovelock
About this listen
Tonight was like any other work night, making his security guard rounds until Jose came across a couple making out in their car. He watched until the hot blonde and her boyfriend walked back to her condo, and to his surprise, they continued their session on the balcony. Should Jose stay in the shadows and watch? Just how far will the couple go?
©2017 Lexi Lovelock (P)2018 Lexi LovelockNarration was good, although the female voice needs more practice
short and Hot
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
This is the first book of Lexi’s that I have listened to and I look forward to trying more of her work in the future. The storyline is from a spectator’s point of view. The story is only 13 pages or 19 Minutes on audio so it gets to the sexual scene quite quickly.
Jack did an amazing job with the narration. I really enjoy his deep voice. I found it perfect for Jose the security guard. I look forward to listening to more of his work in the future.
Erotic Short Story
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
Hot
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
fast & erotic
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
Off the charts hot!
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
Narration was great- I can't get enough of Jack's voice. So deep and tempting. Great job!
🎧AudiobookObsession🎧
🎧 AudiobookObsession🎧
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
Lexi Lovelock got this right, starting at the beginning.
Jack Calihan was the Perfect narrator for the part. He did an AMAZING, EXTRAORDINARY, ONE OF A KIND PERFORMANCE in this very short book with a lot of Punch! I enjoy Jack as a narrator, because he really gets into the character.
This short story is for adults 18+ who can handle sexual undertones.
#AudiobookObsessionReviewer🎧 ronigirl
Our Sercurity Guard is Nymphomanic Stalker!!!
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
Listener received this title free
Pretty good
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
When writing erotica it can be tricky to create a scene that has broad appeal, because everyone's tastes are different.
For me, this book was a turn off. I prefer erotica to feel *erotic*, but this had none of the sensuality or finesse that would have made it so much sexier. The biggest issue was the writing. So many phrases were repetitive, word choices were often jarring, cliched, or ridiculous, and every syllable of the dialogue from the woman could have been lifted from a sleazy adult film.
As a woman, I just didn't find it realistic, and as a reader it wasn't compelling. How the voyeuristic security guard could determine the intimate grooming regimen of 'the blonde woman's boyfriend' from such a distance away I've no idea, but it was just one of the unfortunate moments that really jerked me out of the story.
It felt like a fantasy written by a man, and not just because the 'male gaze' in the story has a masculine POV. It was tacky, with very little engaging characterisation. A paltry attempt was made to set the couple up as being lovingly infatuated with each other, but it wasn't backed up by their interactions.
When writing a short story you really have to take care to ensure it is exquisitely crafted because there's so little to judge it upon that everything has to work and the writing needs to be on point. I was hoping this short story would be 'sinfully erotic' and a brief but wild ride, but it was disappointing.
The only saving grace was the narrator, whose deep, rich voice was perfect for this genre of story. I would definitely listen to other books narrated by Jack Calihan, though I wouldn't listen to other books by Lexi Lovelock unless they were also free.
I'd recommend this book if you are looking for a quick, cheap, gritty thrill and aren't fussed about the writing. It could be useful for someone with a visual impairment, for example, who is looking for something equivalent to audio-described X-rated films.
*I received this book free of charge in exchange for an honest, unbiased review.
Disappointing story, good narrator
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.
Short Erotic story!
Something went wrong. Please try again in a few minutes.