Dropping this series

First book was pretty good. Wished for more developememt in the story and character in the next book. Off which i got non!!! How does the bond work? How to they accept the MCs dimension when they go back? How will they make their relationship work? Got a bunch more qs with no answers or hints...

The story is like rolling the dice between bad B action movie scens and copy/pasting them. I ligth read, together with some harem elements can be quite enjoyable. But the jumble och scen doesn't make sence and is full of holes. Sometimes it's even stupid. OMG last scen, VR, so wrong I had to listen to it in 1.4 speed. And ending it in a debriefing which doesn't give anything to the story. Just enoying!

The characters. As I said a light read with some harem can be nice. But it can be great with good characters. MC is converging with all of Eric Valls other MCs. They don't grow and you don get to know more about them or how they think. They can only be explained by multiple personality disorder. For the harem part it's almost non existent, ie a harem book without harem. :/

To Eric: last three books has been disappointing. Put some more time and effort into your books and they could be great. I think the demographic is is gonna get tired of this. If you have any help or proof readers - replace them all!

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